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  1. Jul 25, 2016 #1
    Scorpio707

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    I see you from a distance…
    and I know that it is you.
    Like a candy crush girl,
    I end up feeling all blue.
    My knees go weak, and
    then my heart skips a beat.
    Muster courage to speak…
    but my voice suddenly squeaks.
    I end up looking like a fool…
    embarrassed I want to drown myself in a pool.
    My eyes give away so I see…
    like a flower that attracts a honey bee.
    Yet again, I end up feeling happy and glee.


     
    Scorpio707, Jul 25, 2016
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  2. Jul 25, 2016 #2
    jskls

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    Nice one Meenu. Enjoyed reading
     
    jskls, Jul 25, 2016
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  3. Jul 25, 2016 #3
    Scorpio707

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    Thank you Laks. Happy you liked it :).
     
    Scorpio707, Jul 25, 2016
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  4. Jul 26, 2016 #4
    LakshmiKMBhat

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    It happens:)
     
    LakshmiKMBhat, Jul 26, 2016
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  5. Jul 26, 2016 #5
    GoogleGlass

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    Candy Crush girl, I See You after a gap :)

    Keep seeing, keep writing :)
     
    GoogleGlass, Jul 26, 2016
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  6. Jul 26, 2016 #6
    Scorpio707

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    Hahaha lol...yeah after a months gap :). How are you GG?
     
    Scorpio707, Jul 26, 2016
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    Scorpio707

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    It happens to all right :grinning:. Thanks Lakshmi
     
    Scorpio707, Jul 26, 2016
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  8. Jul 26, 2016 #8
    parineetha

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    Very Nice Meens.
    U still have counts of ur peoms, just wondering!:biggrin:
     
    parineetha, Jul 26, 2016
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  9. Jul 26, 2016 #9
    Scorpio707

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    Oh yes I do...158 as of today :D. On IL posted 148:).

    Nice to hear from you HQN...been a while.
     
    Scorpio707, Jul 26, 2016
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  10. Jul 26, 2016 #10
    GoogleGlass

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    the poems were on vacation or what? :) doing good scorps
     
    GoogleGlass, Jul 26, 2016
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