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I will always love your lies...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Dinny, Aug 12, 2013.

  1. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    When we had first met each other
    Feom then i felt i knew you forever
    I told you my secrets
    Something i had not told anyone ever.
    you listened to me
    And you must've thought I would never end
    who would have thought
    we would become more than just friends.
    Or are we just friends??
    To understand you it took me some time
    And then i got to know the real you.
    A guy so caring and gentle
    with a heart so true
    Though you've always been a lil rebel.
    You're different unlike anyone I've ever known
    and now i dont want to think of a day
    when you'll be gone

    But then i guess time answers all
    If it is meant to be ...
    someday time will remove this wall
    I dont know how long will we remain together?
    All i know is you can always make me smile.
    But will this remain forever??
    I dont know...may be I'll have to wait a while
    Time will reveal what lies ahead
    but always remember what I have said.
    Meeting you has changed my life
    The feelings that i've for you
    Wont die ever
    I will never let it go
    Just one request
    Remember me always and I'll too.
     
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  2. Dinny

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    I can see the jealousy in your eye
    You cant hide it from me
    no matter how hard you try
    I know theres something stuck in your head
    Like me does it also make you
    roll out of your bed ???

    Feels like we are standing still
    while everyone is moving
    I've seen you lashing
    On ppl to whom i get close
    what are you proving??

    I've seen you divert topics
    When i talk about ppl
    Of whom you are jealous.
    I've seen you turn harsh on me
    Whenever i mention
    Somebody's name

    Yes there is A problem
    and we need to solve it
    Its so deep and thick
    That we both cant dissolve it
    Before it ruins our life
    Before theres a fatality
    Lets keep our eyes open
    and understand Jealousy is life’s reality

    Theres a solution to it
    You accept that theres something between you and me
    Something more than you can see
    Something that you are trying to hide
    Accept it and then there wont be any jealousy.......
    Dont hide it anymore i can see it in your eyes
    I'll luv you...and luv your lies.
     
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    Dear RGS,

    What can I say more than I have already said! The number of nominations all your writings receive should tell you that you are heading in the very right direction! This was nominated to FP of the Month by Pallavi4me, congratulations once again!!

    I know I am intruding in Dinny's thread, a thread in which she is making a great progress as a poetess. Why progress, I see she has arrived! But I am sure she will not mind this intrusion?!

    It only goes to show how you influence everyone into poetry! There was a time I have replied you in verses. I now know better!!

    This poem has its own soul RGS. It is like it comes alive as one reads it. The love pangs are there to touch!

    Keep it up.

    L, Kamla

     
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  4. ragavss77

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    ah! The travails of human love!!!!
     
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  5. Dinny

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    First of all i've no mind to mind :crazy:
    So the intrusion is completely welcome.

    Wowwwww!!!
    Kamla the poetess??? Thats news to me....Just one of your many facets i believe....:bowdown:
     
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    Raga
    Welcome to IL!!

    :)
     
  7. Dinny

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    Its just too late

    Too late to ask you to return
    Too late to tell you the reason

    Too late to tell you what went wrong
    Too late to explain you everything

    Too late for us to compromise
    Too late for me to apologise

    Too late to tell you i am sorry
    Too late to say i'll miss you honey

    Too late to sit and pretend
    But babbyy this is definitely not the end

    If you ever find yourself gloomy and blue
    Just turn around... i'll be near you :)
     
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    too late it seems the call to return
    for I have begun the journey of no return

    having waited all alone for long
    longing to hear your romantic song

    turning around on those gloomy days
    is way past my route and there isn't a U turn

    my journey doesn't need a passport nor a licence
    was born with a return ticket and the date field blank

    do join me when your adventure is over
    shall chat on your arrival at hell if all is not well

    :rotfl:rotfl:rotfl
     
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    All is definitely not well...
    It feels like hell

    I told him i'll follow close behind
    But he never turned around

    I've tried to follow him faster and faster still
    But he has moved away...
    he has got some will

    Its not the tears
    that i fear
    this time
    Its his wrath
    I've a feeling this time
    He might not return on the friendship path

    Every relationship
    Doesnt have to be romantic
    I had a frienship
    And it was fantastic

    I'll regret my behavior
    I wish he was back here
    Because this separation is very hard to bear.
     
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  10. Dinny

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    Forgot to answer this part.....

    Dont wait for my arrival
    In hell
    Because i am an angel
    And i'll
    Find my place in
    Heaven

    But on earth let me try
    A flight ticket i'll buy
    Then to switzerland i'll fly
    And enjoy..
    If somebody wishes to join
    Then they'll find me on the snow mountain
    :rotfl :rotfl

    Googlegee your reply was hilarious....only you can come up with those lines :bowdown:
     
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