A Pleasant Love!

Varloo · Dec 3, 2007

Dear Padma,
it was very nice story, I enjoyed it thoroughly. It is true that many people start these habits innocently and it ends in tragedy. I feel that you should send this stor to Woman's Era. I am sure they will publish it.
Good going!:hatsoff

padmasowrirajan · Dec 3, 2007

Dear Varloo,
Thanks for for giving your time to read the story. True, every habit start small, but they dont end small. They leave an everlasting impression on the person. Only people have to realise and come out of their habits.

Navpreet · Dec 6, 2007

I will give you 10/10 for this story.It's well -written,easily understood and bind the reader till end.keep on writing.

Blondie · Dec 7, 2007

Dear PS,

a very pleasant read. Made me remember the countless times that i tried to stay awake and keep up the conversation so that DH doesn't fall asleep behind the wheel while returning home from a party in the early hours. Accidents are waiting to happen and driving while intoxicated is a lethal combination in both fiction and real life. In fiction it is in the hands of the writer to decide the out come but in real life the consequences may not be so... i.e end in happily ever after.