Yeh barish ka mausam..... Yeh dil ka machalna.......... kash hota yeh tufaan....... na aate hum bahar........ fir kambal mein hoti lambi neend........ maja aata itna dil jata bhar...... magar kyon hoga aisa......... kyonki maine jo chaha........ Yeh barish ka mausam....... hai sawan sa mausam.... na hota koi kaam...... kash ek din aisa hota...... Rehte Adam aur Eve...... barasta ishwar ka vardaan...... aata sab kuch jholi mein..... bin maange....bin khate......... kash hota aisa......... yeh barish ka mausam........ I dont know how u like it but I wrote it when I was simply writing an email...may be I need to improve on it...
Hi Anshu Excellent poem. You have put in the words very beautifully. enjoyed reading your barish ka mausam......... Ya we feel like to sleep for long time and sit in the gallery and watch the rains with something hot chatpatta to eatBig Laugh If we start getting everything before asking then how will you enjoy the life. I enjoyed rains when I came to India this time during july and august it was too much but still better then not having rains at all which I don't get to see here in Egypt.
Nice poem. I enjoyed it. Only Mumbaikars can enjoy the mansoon. I see that whenever first mansoon rain comes every one gets to the streets and want to get wet while dancing with the belief that doind so will immunise health for the rest of mansoon season. Here is my additional lines to your poem. yeh barish ka mausam gharam pakora ka mausam yeh barish ka mausam rishthadoron ke saath judneka mausam yeh barish ka mausam baadalon ka rangeela mausam yeh barish ka mausam bhoond bhoond se bharish kidikionme ghir ke sangeeth denewala mausam Please excuse me if my Hindi is not pure. Regards, Geetha Iyer
Thanks a lot guys for the appreciation. Could not respond earlier as I went to India for Durga puja.Just came back today. Anshu