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"when Love Is Not Madness, Its Not Love" - The True Blessing.

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  1. IniyaaSri

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    Yes dear! : ) : ) : )
    We will know that tomorrow!
    Next episode will be posted early morning(IST)
     
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    nice update ... eager to know what is going to happen next?
     
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    Episode 16:


    Tulasi and Diya returned home and Grandma was busy drawing Kolam (Rangoli).

    “Good evening Grandma!” – Diya smiled brightly

    “Good evening dear “– Grandma reciprocated

    Both girls refreshed and sat at the entrance chit chatting.

    “Your snacks is ready” – Grandma served them two plates of bajjis and Diya was very happy.

    “Hmmmmm!!! Its very delicious grandma! Once I asked my maid to prepare such and she ended up preparing something else! She is such a bad cook you see” – Diya said as she munched the bajjis.

    “Grandma is the best cook” – Tulasi said with pride

    “Because I love cooking! Not everyone should love cooking! Maybe she is not interested in cooking…She would have just cooked in order to earn and save her family.” – Grandma said.

    “By the way Diya….” – Grandma said and Diya looked at her munching few more bajjis.

    “Yes grandma” – Diya

    “Your maid doesn’t have any name?!” -Grandma

    “I think her name is….” – Diya was trying to recollect

    “Thinking hard?!!! For how many years she has been working in your house” – Grandma

    “Like?!! Two years I suppose!!!” – Diya

    “And still you don’t remember her name?!! How does your parents address her?!! Not by name?!!!” – Grandma

    “No ma…Not by name…. By the way I got her name….. Her name is Nirmala” – Diya

    “Is it ok if someone doesn’t address you by name?! No right?! ……Address her by name dear!!!” – Grandma said affectionately

    “Hmmm yeah!” – Diya kept looking at Grandma

    “Even she is like you na…….” – Grandma said

    "Like me????!!!! Like me what?" - Diya didn't understand

    "Human being like you" - Grandma said and it hard her hard.

    “Right…. But I have not used to it…. My parents never addressed her by name. So for me, she was just maid…. Here after she is Nirmala” – Diya smiled and Tulasi was busy munching Diya’s bajjis.

    “Oh my God!!! Grandma! She emptied mine!!!!” – Diya exclaimed and Tulasi ran away with her plate of bajjis.

    The chase started and Tulasi ran away into Mary’s house with the plate.

    Mary was busy in the kitchen and Tulasi ran to her and hid behind the door quietly. She placed the plate on the shelf quietly as she stood. Mary chuckled and continued her work.

    “Tulasi where are you?!!!!” – Diya came running and hit Joyal who came out of the room without having the least knowledge of what was happening outside.

    “Oops!!! Why are you running like this?!!!” – Joyal asked as he rubbed his forehead and Diya kept looking at him as such unintentionally.

    “Oh my God! What happened?!” – Tulasi came running and Saw Joyal and Diya.

    “You are here is it?!!! That’s why! I was wondering what Diya is doing here” – Joyal frowned and walked away.

    “Diya are you okay?” – Tulasi looked at Diya and Diya’s heart beats were dancing rather than pumping.

    “oye!” – Tulasi shook her and rubbed her forehead. But Diya was almost out of world barely answering Tulasi’s questions.

    “Come let’s go! Wait wait! Let me bring my bajjis” – Tulasi ran into the kitchen and found that the plate was empty.

    “Aunty!!!!!! My bajjis?!!!” – Tulasi exclaimed and Joyal laughed hard munching all the bajjis altogether.

    “you idiot!!! You bajji thief” - Tulasi hit him hard and Joyal kept laughing

    “Don’t hit him naa…Grandma will make us fresh bajjis! Come” – Diya pulled Tulasi who didn’t even bother what she was saying.

    “Enough enough enough” – Joyal pretended to plead and finally Tulasi walked away with Diya.





    “So…. bye girls! Will miss you” – Veni said with a sad face.

    “We will meet in the tuition na!” – Aki

    “We will meet in the weekends as well” – Abi

    “I didn’t expect at this at all” – Veni was slightly upset.

    “I wonder why did Uncle think of such a thing all of a sudden?!!” – Aki

    “He always does the best for me! So that’s fine! Just that am missing the school and you both” – Veni

    "Dont worry! You are the best always! Not like us..." - Abi

    “Hmmm! Anyways! Our best wishes for your new school! You will be the star wherever you go! Don’t worry” – Aki

    “I have to again prove myself there….I will be a fresher in the new school….No one will know about me….Hmmm…Have to start everything from the beginning again! Anyways the school has the best coaching and that’s why dad decided this! So let me see! Good scope for good marks!” – Veni

    “Yeah that’s right! It’s a very big institute! They have colleges as well! If you get good marks, its very easy to get into their colleges!!! – Aki said.

    “Hmmm All the best! Bye Veni! Don’t forget us…” – Aki and abi left and Veni kept watching them walking away.

    She felt as if everything is walking away from her. Her school, her influence in her school, her pride, her familiarity, her celebrity-like fame, everything…everything was just vanishing In front of her along with Aki and Abi.

    “Anyways! Let me start from the beginning to prove my worth” – Veni said to herself.



    That was her first day in the new school and as expected everything was completely new to Veni and she sat quietly in the first bench. The boys in the class were too happy seeing such a beautiful girl in their classroom. As the teacher entered, he took the attendance note and started calling the names by order.

    “Krishna Va….” – before he completed, everyone heard two voices.

    Veni was raising her hands as her name is being called and she stopped as such hearing a guy’s voice along with her voice.

    The teacher paused and looked. A girl and a guy were raising their hands parallelly and the whole classroom looked at them.

    “Krishna Vamsi” - The teacher called and the guy stood.

    “Present Sir!!!” – He said and most of the girls in the room admired his handsome face and that streak of holy ash on his forehead.

    The confidence in the way he stood was very impressive and Veni lowered her hand.

    “Krishna Veni!!!” – The teacher called and she stood at once.

    “Present Sir!” – Veni said and Krishna looked at her.
     
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    Thanks Dear : ) Have posted the next episode : )
    Good day : ) : ) : )
     
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    Nice one...Story get interesting day by day...
    Hope veni met her pair
    Love triangle in tulasi's part?
    Eagerly waiting for next episode...
     
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    Thank you so much dear : )
    Happy thats it is interesting! : )
    He he he : D Lets wait and watch dear!
    Thank you so much for taking time and posting a feedback : )
    Happy weekend : ) : ) : )
     
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    Do not like Diya reaction :rage:
    Good one....both Krishna's what gonna happen to them waiting...

    Happy weekend
     
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    Ha Ha Ha! : D Lets see what she is going to do!!!
    Thanks for your feedback dear! : )
    Happy weekend : )
     
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    My dear Ladies!

    The Next Episode will be posted after a week probably, its vacation here!
    Sorry! Will try my best to post at the earliest!
    Thank you!
     
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    I have a feeling this is two generation story
     
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