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  1. Apr 27, 2019 #1
    jskls

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    A place for me
    Where will it be
    When I am
    Forgotten ...

    I cherish them
    I love them
    I appreciate them
    I hold them
    Close to my heart
    only to know
    that I am forgotten…

    When my special days
    are forgotten
    When my presence
    is ignored
    When good deeds
    are in vain
    When my visits
    are forgotten
    When their thoughts
    hold no place for me
    When their hearts
    hold no love for me
    Where will I be ?

    A place for me
    Where will it be
    If I forget
    my own self …
    Neither would
    I live in their thoughts
    Nor would I
    live in mine …
    A place for me
    Where will it be ?
     
    jskls, Apr 27, 2019
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  2. Apr 27, 2019 #2
    Lalithambigai

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    In our hearts @jslks and in the hearts of your true friends and well-wishers. Every IL would go through this crossroads that you have so nicely depicted in your lovely poem :thumbup: at some point so it does ring a bell and seems like a deja vu moment for those that have been there already.
     
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    A scary situation to be in, Lakshmi @jskls.
    I don't wish this for anyone, known or unknown.
     
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    Thyagarajan

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    :hello:
    It must be in the hearts of your pals.
    When we remember and say that there is no forgetting that.


    The more times you remember and recall the more you retain. Retention and recall dramatically increase . So how you remember & entertain Possibility of forgetting Those moments.
    It will stay
    It will stay
    Always green
    Always green
    in your memory.

    Thanks for lovely expression of craving moments.
    Regards.
    God comes alive in (your) poem and so too in anthologies.
     
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    Adharv

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    Well expressed ma'am :thumbsup: :clap2:

    Love yourself "who is" travelling along every moment of your life and you will locate the place for you :hearteyes::hearteyes:

    Cheers!!
     
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    @jskls Lakshmi we must try to live with our own thoughts and work which gives peace of mind .when you forget yourself God is with you and show the way to walk without any one.


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    jskls

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    Thank you @Lalithambigai. Sometimes life just leaves us at crossroads like this. Thanks for your warm feedback
     
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    jskls

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    Truly scary. I wish and hope the same too
     
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    jskls

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    Thanks for the assurance @Thyagarajan sir

    ha ha God comes alive in your writings. Nice feedback thanks
     
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    Thank you @Adharv. That’s a positive way to look at it. Thanks for the kind words
     
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