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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by ratan, Jan 25, 2019.

  1. Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    Wow no words to express:thumbup: very realistically penned :worship2: convo's were very lively and strong....
    This is punch is not enough :boxing::boxing::smash2: (this is for his crap answer :rage:)

    hope he realise his mistake and stop ruining akash's family anyway his family is already broken :argue: I loved the way shailaja challenged abhay as a mom :worship2::worship2: her self-esteem is well portrayed ma'am :thumbup: also I liked the way she keeps this sick issue way from kids and her parents and make them stay happy :number_one: wish she finds some happiness in near future. I don't understand why parents fail to be role models for kids :facepalm:
    Thank you and keep rocking.
     
  2. ratan

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    Thanks Adharv. I love the way you comments. your rocking comments keep me rocking and encourage to write on these types of social issues. .:blush: Thanks once again.
     
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  3. ratan

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    Thanks to all my dear readers for likings Rebirth's episodes.
    Regards.
     
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  4. Adharv

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    Thank you @ratan ma'am for sharing this valuable message via your impressive narration. As said before never looked like first story :thumbup: very crisp!! keep writing. Good luck. Great evening!
     
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    @ratan well going ma.A strong bunch given back by Shailaja
     
  6. ratan

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    Thank you. Yes. it is a demand of time. Every time compromising makes other person more dominating.
     
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    Well written, @ratan. I wish every woman gets this inner strength and help the other women gain strength in their community.:clap2:
     
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  8. ratan

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    Thank you @GeetaKashyap . Well said. I portray Shailja's character to inspire woman for this purpose only as you mention in above lines. It can be a revolutionary step at first sight but eventually good for family's peace specially for victim.
     
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    @ratan, this is very good going by Shaliaja. It is a big shame for Abhay!
     
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    Thanks @ peddadas. Keep reading and give your valuable feedback.
    Regards.
     

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