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Eligible Bachelor

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by muggs, Mar 15, 2018.

  1. creativemumma

    creativemumma Gold IL'ite

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    I think it would better for his dad to change the place for sometime...May be Aastha to takeup onsite again and go abroad along with her father?
     
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    rupz Silver IL'ite

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    @muggs,

    Well written.

    Will Aastha take her father with her and her sister as well..or will they want someone reliable at her fathers position at work..will it be Samyaks brother Vedant.. ??
     
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  3. muggs

    muggs Gold IL'ite

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    @aarthi28 thanks for your feedback:blush: yes Aastha has to take some decision.
    Tragedies can make a person weak or strong... Let's see how Aastha takes up the challenges and come over.
     
  4. muggs

    muggs Gold IL'ite

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    @ratan thanks for the feedback :blush:
    You are absolutely true... We make so many plans but something happens suddenly and changes everything. That's life I guess... :)
     
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    Thanks @creativemumma for the feedback...:blush: Yes changing place might help him but leaving behind the business and her sister's studies, it would be difficult for Aastha. Let's see what Aastha decides...:icon_writing:
     
  6. muggs

    muggs Gold IL'ite

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    Thanks, @rupz for your feedback...:blush:
    Let's see how Aastha will handle the situation and who will be her savior...:icon_writing:
     
  7. creativemumma

    creativemumma Gold IL'ite

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    Sure..Waiting to see how she would handle them
     
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    OMG..Could not guess whats gonna happen next! Good Going!
     
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    Nice write up.. finished the story so far in one go!!
     
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    leenam05 Platinum IL'ite

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    dear muggs,

    I started reading your story yesterday night & just now finished it. Your narration is amazing. I am guessing something but would wait further update from you.

    Please unite our Love birds soon.:grinning::grinning:
     
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